新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

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It is believed by some people that games are very important for children, because they learn many things from game, such as practicing their hands, communicating with their partners, and understanding each other, and so on. But is it the same important for adults? In my opinion, it's the same crucial as it for children. First of all, according to the scientists' researches, games are not only can relax one's mind after they doing hard jobs, but also release the pressure of theirs. For example, after finishing a complicated report, I feel sleepy and extremely exhausted. But I can't go to bed because I feel pain in my left brain because of overwork. So I play a game for a while to release my tension. It shows very useful for me. Moreover, games are very useful for those old people. After retirement, they do less and think less than before, then their brains begin to lose some abilities, such as loss in concentration or memory, low-speed action,and so on. If they play game, they still practice their hands and brains every day, that will be better than do nothing. Finally, games provide some new experience in one's life. In addition to making some good friends whom play together with, people learn some new knowledge through playing games. In general, games are essential not only for children but also for adults.