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新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

发布时间:2013-08-06 17:06浏览次数:894
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【题目要求

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

【题目分析

同意这个观点比较容易写。成年人也有娱乐的需求,从繁重的压力中解脱出来(escape),游戏对老年人更是如此。从游戏中可以学到很多东西(桥牌——团队精神;围棋、象棋——拓展智力)
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文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇。

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It is believed by some people that games are very important for children, because they learn many things from game, such as practicing their hands, communicating with their partners, and understanding each other, and so on. But is it the same important for adults? In my opinion, it's the same crucial as it for children. First of all, according to the scientists' researches, games are not only can relax one's mind after they doing hard jobs, but also release the pressure of theirs. For example, after finishing a complicated report, I feel sleepy and extremely exhausted. But I can't go to bed because I feel pain in my left brain because of overwork. So I play a game for a while to release my tension. It shows very useful for me. Moreover, games are very useful for those old people. After retirement, they do less and think less than before, then their brains begin to lose some abilities, such as loss in concentration or memory, low-speed action,and so on. If they play game, they still practice their hands and brains every day, that will be better than do nothing. Finally, games provide some new experience in one's life. In addition to making some good friends whom play together with, people learn some new knowledge through playing games. In general, games are essential not only for children but also for adults.

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