参考词汇:reduce减少; rest 剩余的; picky 挑剔的; keep an eye on 注意、留意。
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Firstly,we'd better not order too much food.We should eat up all the food we order.If we can't we are supposed to bring the rest food home.Secondly,it's wrong for us to be picky.Maybe some food doesn't taste delicious.But,it is good for our health.We need it.Thirdly we must keep an eye on the food we have at home especially fruits and vegetables,or they will be bad.The most important thing is that we should realize that reducing food is everyone's business.Let's do it right now,shall we?
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