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On this summer holiday , My parents and I were went to my countryside. How beautiful it is!I love my countryside very much. We visited a place of interest and enjoy ourselves.Last but not least ,I also went to see my best friend who lives in countryside for so many years.Finally ,our family had a good holiday!