Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者学术词汇方面要多累积,词汇表达不够丰富;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
if we want to find a good job after graduate, we should study hard from now. Do't waste your time for play computer game and movie, move on, man! Fight for if and don't hesitate, if you do it, you will really feel the life is substantious. The sense is marvelous!