牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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On the last weekend.I visited Beijing zoo.Many people fed the monkeys and played with the tigers.Animals and people are friendly.We should treat the animals. Protect the environment against pollution is very important.Don't drop litter carelessly at the zoo.Every should know protect wild animals importence.Because protect animals is protecting ourselves. I protected wild animal is really interesting.So we should protect animals right away.