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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46206
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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句式变化多样;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

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This is a real story. Once upon a time, in winter,a plane was crashed a mountain and the pilot was dead, but there is a women and her two baby, who was survived. There is a desolate area that none can find them. At night, temparature is taper and the mother take off her coat to warm the babies, the wind is so bitterly that the mother want to get into the tent, but it is too small to get in. At second day morning, the woman heared a helicopter fly upon her, so she scream loudly in order to make the pilot can hear her, but it doesn't work. Then she stamps a "SOS", fortunately the helicopter pilot discovered it and telephoned the nearest town to rescue them.

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