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Wang Meimei,who is one of my good friend,was born in 1997 in USA.She is very cute,friendly and warm-hearted.She always willing to help others when they are in trouble.Indeed,she also a sunshine girl.In her daily life,she like playing football and basketball.Her favourite subject is English.Thus,I can learning English from her as well as having a English talking with her.