小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.She is a beautiful girl who has long black hair, two big black eyes as well as a red mouth. Her voice is better and she is skilled in singing. Meanwhile,She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games,chess as well. She not only nice but also often helps us. In our class,we all like her very much.