Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
句式变化多样;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
This is a real story. Once upon a time, in winter,a plane was crashed a mountain and the pilot was dead, but there is a woman and her two baby, who was survived. There is a desolate area that none can find them. At night, temparature is taper and the mother take off her coat to warm the babies, the wind is so bitterly that the mother want to get into the tent, but it is too small to get in. At second day morning, the woman heared a helicopter fly upon her, so she scream loudly in order to make the pilot can hear her, but it doesn't work. Then she stamps a "SOS", fortunately the helicopter pilot discovered it and telephoned the nearest town to rescue them.