雅思写作范文:手机与因特网

文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the rapid developments of the internet technology, there is a significant trend that the cell phone works as a terminal device of the internet which can benefit the customers. First, as lots of software companies developed many kinds of applications for the cellphone the cellphone is more powerful rather than just calling. Nowadays we can pay the bill, read the e-mails and watching TV by the cell phone. It helps people get information more quickly and efficiency. Second, the video call is much easier than before with the internet technology. It is a revolution of comutation. With cellphone we can not only hear our friends' voice but also see them face. Sometimes we can even hold a meeting through cellphone or get medicine help from a doctor who is living in the other country. In spite of the obvious benefits there are also some negative sides of internet cell phone. The price not the biggest problem which is much higher than common cell phones. The biggest problem is personal information security. Now the cell phone records too much personal informations which including the bank account, friends' name and photographs. So if you loose your cell phone, you will have to change all your code which relate to your personal information. Unfortunately, the protection technology for cell phone is not good enough.We need to do lots of works to improve the protection for personal information which stored in cell phone.