雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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The international travel is becoming more and more convenient since the transport is becoming cheaper caused by the market competition. Traveling in different countries can make valuable memories and extend your life. At the same time international traveling also create some negative effects. First, international traveling is a good chance to enjoy the different lives in different countries which you cann't enjoy in your own country. It is a pity that live in home town all the life. With modern internet technology, people can enjoy the beautiful views in different countries. However even the internet can not replace the traveling. In fact now more and more people choose to go out their door and travel as the international traveling is much more attractive than only staying before the computer. On the other side the international traveling also bring some serious problems. When we meet some health problems, it might be difficult to get help from local hospital even you have bought an insurance as you speak a different language and you might almost have no idea where you can get the help. The international traveling need very good prepare. The problems caused by poor preparing will not only hurt yourself but also disturb the local people's living. Unfortunatly we have more and more problems caused by the international traveling. It makes some city facilities overload which will create bad effect on the local persons. The international traveling also make some environmental problems as they left garbage during camping and hiking. In a word the trend of international travel can not be impressed. But international travel needs very well organization works not only by the travelers but also by the governments. The governments should manage more convenient service for the foreign traveler and make some laws for international travel.