高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown used to be such a beautiful place.There are many grenn trees around the town.And there is a small river beside the town. The river is so clean that we can see many kinds of fishes running freely in the river.But now,it has changed a lot.Both sides of street are fuiied with tall buildings and small shops. All kinds of cars are coming and going in the street.The environment becomes worse and worse because of the development of the industry.Besides,the number of trees is reducing and the fishes is disappearing.So dealing with the serious pollution is the most important thing.I think I should tyr my best to do this as a member of the town.