高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown used to be such a beautiful place.There are many green trees around the town.And there is a mintor river beside the town. The river is so clean that we can see many kinds of fishes running freely in the river. But now,it has changed a lot.Both sides of the street are filled with tall buildings and small shops. All kinds of cars are coming and going in the street.The environment becomes more and more unfavorable because of the development of the industry.Besides,the number of trees is reducing and the fishes is disappearing.So doing with the serious pollution is the most important thing.I think I should try my best to do this as a member of the town.