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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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This is a real story. Once upon a time, in winter,a plane was crashed a mountain and the pilot was dead, but there is a woman and her two baby, who was survived. There is a desolate area that none can find them. At night, temperature is gradually decreased and the mother take off her coat to warm the babies, the wind is so bitterly that the mother want to get into the tent, but it is too small to get in. At second day morning, the woman hear a helicopter flied over her, so she screams loudly to let the pilot hear her, but it doesn't work. Then she stamps a "SOS", fortunately the helicopter pilot discovered it and telephoned the nearest town to rescue them.

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