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save money we should save money in daily.money is one of the transfer tool.it supplies much convenient for us when we buy some things.we can buy foods.clothes,house,travel and so on.money is very inportant for us. but .many people around the world are waste money everyday,this phenomenon is very serious in our country.some of people have dinner with friends or others use the public funds.they ususlly A la carte many dishes more than they could eat.every time many dishes were wasted when there are leff.a lot of money and foods were wasted every year.this phenomenon happened many schools especially in universitiies.many students in university are take too money on their clothes or on birthday party. our parents hard work from morning to night for earning money.there are want to much money for provide a better life of our.today.hundreds of thousands people are bearing hungey in the world.they may be less hungry if we save money every day and give them to buy foods clothes.we build more home for the lose homes person.lets us do it right now.save money every day,for the humanitary social.
