广东汕头市2013届高三上学期期末试卷英语作文

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More than 30 percent students don't want to share with others neither happiness nor sadness. Our education don't let children know the importance of the share. It's very necessary to share feeling at the time we are living. we should learn how to share feeling ,It is helpful to the future's grow.