2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅；作者词汇表达不够多样，要注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

In this world,we can see and listen many things.For example,Internet has been brodening our horizon,but Internet also can deliever some mistake messages.So many people who don't know truths can have many misunderstanding.For this,it's bad to get conclusions for instant. As far as I am concerned,we should learn understand things from many ways.