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单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。
Good ways to keep healthy It is important for us to keep healthy,and we have many ways to keep healthy. As for food,I think we should have a balanced diet,we can eat more vegetables,fruit and less meat because meat is bad for our healthy. As for exercise,we should do more exercise .For example,taking a walk,playing ball games is good for our healthy. As for happiness,I think we should keep happy.We can make friends with others.sometimes talking with friends can make us be happy.And we can keep smile to others.the life will smile to you if you smile to the life. As a word,keeping healthy is important.
