题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;请注意分段。
When I was a little girl, it is so cool to have a computer. Most of the time we spend time in communicating with our little friends, families and neiborhood. But now, all these change, computer become normal and current in every family, sometimes, we use it every day,but little time we spend in face to face communicating. With the development of technology, computer gradually become a part of our life. We use it to surf the internet, in order to find the way to solve the problems we meet in usual life or our works. Computer also provides us a stage to make new friends, even if they are in foreign countries. We can get a large sum of informations, but we have to face a problem how to get the news we want and avoid the unnecessary disturbance. Every coin has two sides, the time computer gives our chance to understand the outside world, we forget the people around us.