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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10534
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

In the modern society,dialects is a symptom of a nation's multiculture.However,with the popularization of official language which available to anyone else,everyone can come across.So,dialects in public places are not acceptable,because not everyone understand what the speaker says,and it doesn't fit into the public occasions.Dialects represent a unofficial way in my opinion. Can you image a scenario in your mind that a officer or a successful businessman make a state in public with dialects?It's not only confused listeners,but also remain a notion of unofficial or imprudent toward this events.You have never seen a president said dialects in public places,right?Dialects is a special for a nation's culture,it can acceptable in the casual life,but if it gets into the public place,unless you desire to introduce your local culture,or do not use dialects,not all of one will get what you said. So,dialects is not acceptable in public places,but as a part of multiculture,it should be took into use in casual places.

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