托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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As far as I'm concerned that it is really hard to say whether a snap judgement can be never trusted ot not. As we all known that everything includes the opinion about the snap judgement commonly has two folds, what we should pay attention to is the perspective we are willing to choose. Thus we ought to cearly find out and comprehend the special situation which gives the birth to that relatively snap discrimination. Firstly, some kinds of snap judgements can not be relied on easliy. For example, the doctors or nurses in the hospital can not judge the illness of the patient merely by depending on the superficial symptons. The discripton which is mistakenly made out by just a short and rush glance of the sympton have a great possibility to lead to a catastrophe to the health or even the live of a patient. Take another instance, when we have some practical experiments on chemistery or biology courses, it's somehow ridiculous to draw a conclusion of a chemical or biological phenomenon solely by the snap or rough sence of it. On the other hand, in my opinion, not all the judgements need a deep and careful consideration, thus, in some cases, what we need is the descirption only depends on the superficial sense. For instance which is still about the doctors or nurses. The doctors or nurses who are appointed to have their duties in emergency apartment in the hospital can not carefully and thouroughly make a observation on a patient who is on urgency. What the doctors or nurses ought to do is to try their best to help and rescure their patient straightly as possible as they can, relying on the first snap judgment of the symptons such as the temperature of the body or the condition of the heartbeat. Additionally, first impression is a sort of snap judgment as well, which is extremely essential for an individual's first appointment or the interview, for one person can be judged and estimated about his or her generally condition like the taste or the status or even the attitude towards the life sorely by the primary judgement. In a conclusion, we should consider the snap judgement by taking the peculiar situation of the judgement into account.