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新东方托福高分作文:选择慢节奏生活还是快节奏生活?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:50浏览次数:5812
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题目要求:

Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是,不慌不忙(with full composure),却很有效率(efficient)。所以,我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外,也要看是什么样的事情,工作、学习,都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible),但是与朋友消遣,与家人相伴,却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up),而应该at a slower place。
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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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In recent years, people are living a life at an increasing pace. It seems as if in that way individuals can work efficiently. However, what always surprises us is the news in which white-collar people die suddenly because of constantly working around the clock. So it is a question whether to live in a hurry or at a slower pace? In my opinion, I believe that living slowly is a great way which benefits our work, makes it possible to do what we like in our spare time and is good for our health as well. Firstly, a slow-paced lifestyle can make us work outstandingly. There’s no doubt that details determine people end up winners or losers. When we are allowed more time to think about topics, to find out the keys to the questions or the important points which shouldn't be neglected, we can make decisions reasonably and thus making good progress. So it enables us to do better as well as paving the way to the career. Secondly, living slowly is an undeniable factor to improve our life’s quality. For example, people in my hometown Chengdu, which is located in the southwest of China, are famous for their carefree lifestyle. Here we would like to drink a tea saturated in sunshine after work or watch movies or play sports with friends. For these reasons, we appreciate our life and hold a positive attitude towards difficulties in life. Just do as what we do and you’ll find the life that abounds in happiness and pleasant surprises. Thirdly, it also offers benefits to our health. As we all know, whether old or young, vigorous or bloodless, all can’t bear working ceaselessly. So if we do things at a slower pace, we can spare more time to rest and concern about our health to the extent that we are able to keep away from disease. Therefore, I prefer to live slowly, not only to work better, but also to feel happy and energetic.

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