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字数：300 满分：100分
文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
As students, for more of us who haven't do the part-time jobs or the money we earn is not enough are still use the money earned by our parents hard work, I hold the opinion that we,not a little child now, should save the money in our daily life as we can. One reason I take is that our parents have done lots of thing to bring out us, and with we got old day by day, the white hair burn on their heard. Nowsdays, we are not the children who know nothing any more, we should try our best to make our parents more easy, from the need of money.While another reason is that we will leave the school and do all of thing by ourselves, so we need to learn to collect the money from now.Taking the great hobby, saving money, will do good to our future l. In a word, I am so hand on the action that collect the money in our daily life. Maybe there are many people thinking that it is not necessary, we just do what we think is right.
