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With time going by,everything such as technology and economic develops faster and faster.At the same time,lots of people feel their lives are boring and little meaningful.As an old saying:The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.So now,we should do something to color our lives and make them meaningful. Firstly,have a rest and make our hearts peaceful.Today,we always spend plenty of time working or studying,which lead to fatigue and even illness.Therefore,stopping to have a rest can let us adjust ourselves and working more efficiently.Secondly,visit our friends and relatives frequently.They are our fortunes forever which is extremely precious.We can't live without them. So we should get in well with them.We can go shopping,have a picnic, climb mountains and so on to make our relationships stronger and stronger. Life is colorful,we couldn't only stay with working or studying.It's our freedom and responsibility to have meaningful lives.
