小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend is Mary.She is a beautiful girl.She has long black hair with a pair of big eyes.She likes smile with people.She can play not only piano but also violin.She is a class monitor in class .And she always ready to help students.She can even help teachers too.She is friendly to everyone ,so I like her very much.