福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

The Internet The Internet is wonderful and useful.We can do some shopping without leaving our houses. We can use the Internet for looking for jobs or selling things. We can watch movies, listen to music and write e-mails on the Internet. But there are some bad things on the Internet. We can’t often play games on the Internet. They are bad for our eyes. And we shouldn't spend too much time on it.