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The internet Now,the internet is very important in our life.It can help me do something easy.If we use it well.It will be useful to us.If we can't use it well.Then it will be unavailable to us.So we will use it to our work,homework,relax or do others good things.So the internet will be more and better in the future.And it can help people do something useful.Let people's life will more better.