2014高考英语作文预测集中训练5:英语的重要性

请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

It is acknowledge that English is used by most countries. In my view,English is significant in our common lives.Thanks to English,on the one hand ,we are able to introduce our homeland to the world,On the other hand,it helps us learn the science and technology in advanced countries to service for my homeland. To my knowledge ,learning English is a process with happiness and joy ,isn't it ?