3、这种现象可能产生的影响
表格:
1995 2000 2005
1万人 近4万 12万以上
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Nowadays,travelling has been popularity .Many people usually choose travelling to release their stressments and open their eyes.According to sacistics,the number of visiting outside has 10,000 in 1995,and after 5 years,about 40,000 people choose to travelling,however,in 2005,the number of travelling has over 120,000. There are three reasons for this 现象.First,with the development of economicy,the living stardarnd of people has improved.People have enough money to pay for travelling.Second,the stressments of work make people need time to relax.Third,travelling can spice our life. As far as I am concerned,on the one hand,travelling can help our economic for our country.On the other hand,for us,travelling can broaden our horizon and help us find out what we are truliy interested in.