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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:2005
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
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建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,travelling has been popularity .Many people usually choose travelling to release their stressments and open their eyes.According to sacistics,the number of visiting outside has 10,000 in 1995,and after 5 years,about 40,000 people choose to travelling,however,in 2005,the number of travelling has over 120,000. There are three reasons for this 现象.First,with the development of economicy,the living stardarnd of people has improved.People have enough money to pay for travelling.Second,the stressments of work make people need time to relax.Third,travelling can spice our life. As far as I am concerned,on the one hand,travelling can help our economic for our country.On the other hand,for us,travelling can broaden our horizon and help us find out what we are truliy interested in.

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