2014高考英语作文预测集中训练10:去伦敦旅游

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；运用了丰富的复杂句，另外需注意一些句法错误；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Dear Madame， Please let me introduce myself, I am LiHua，I am taking part in a language training for a short time, I am planning to London for a trip at Sunday. I found some information on internet, would you please help me explain some details in the the advertisement, what I want to understand is about the expense of the trip, and the start time, the end time of it, and could you please introduce the trip leader for me? Thanks for your attention, best regards, Yours, Li Hua