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I love my school,my school isn't only beautiful but also very modern.My favorite subject is English,my English teacher is very kind.I took part in English club when I was a student of Grade 8.My school had a lot of activities.Our club's number entered these activities actively.I costumed a girl which can use magic.I got on well with all of my classmates.All of our classmates are friendly and easily to get on well.I think my school life is meaningful and colorful,I miss it!