作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文中句子偏简单,可增加从句使用量;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
My best friend is ...She is in our class,too. When we began to study at this school, we knew each other and became good friends. She is a beautiful girl with shoulder-length hair. She has a round face and two big black eyes. She studies quite well and she is one of the toppest students in our class. She is kind and friendly and she often helps with my English. I enjoy playing with her because I can learn a lot from her. She likes playing table tennis and waching movies. We often go to movies together. She is polite and modest so I like her very much.