高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；文中的从句不多，且有几处句子错误；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；连词使用偏少。

my country used to be arounded with green trees,and fishes lived in the clean river. but the houses were so poor and narrow. people in the town worled hard and lived simply. now,higth buildings and shops have been buided, big or small cars have been running in the street industry s development makes towns envirment turning worse, the trees have been induced,and fishes have been gone