高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；文中的从句不多，且有几处句子错误；文章词汇表达不够丰富，在拼写方面也要继续努力；连词使用偏少。

My home village used to be around with green trees,and fishes lived in the clean river. But the houses were so poor and narrow. people in the town worked hard and lived simply. now,higth buildings and shops have been buided, big or small cars have been running in the street industry s development makes towns envirment turning worse, the trees have been induced,and fishes have been gone