2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(02):良好饮食习惯

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personally, I think it is one of the most significant elements for us to eat what we eat.For example, organic foods includes meats,fruits,drinks and anything else. most of us would rather pay more money in order to have a better diet . but,at the same time, some of us are still having the not good diet,and they would be bartieular about food,such as the snack. So,to improve the diet life totally,we need to build up a good diet firstly.