2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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The internet has changed our life,a lot of information in the internet,we can use it to watch drama,chat with friends,and we can shopping in the internet,we don't need to waste much time to choose goods,a lot of suitable goods provided in our screen.Most teenager have addicated to this way of shopping. Internet shopping don't need much time to select goods,we can use the rest time of our work time,and we can the comment that other coustom made,we can know if it is suitable for us. But the internet shopping we can't touch the goods we have chosen.For example, we want to buy a pair of shoes,we can't make sure of the size of the shoes if suitable for us. So I suppot if we choosed one thing,we'd better to try it on to the shop.