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My favorite subject My favorite subject is math.I love math very much.Because I think it's really interesting and difficult.It's so difficult.I really like difficult questions.It can let me think of a long time.It can let me find fun in the math.If it's difficult.It will be challenging.As for me,I really don't like easy questions.It's have no challenging.On the other hand.I want to be a science when I grow up.Because I think science is good for people.It can let people to get better life. I love math best.