托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

With the rapid development of the society, people have to take most of time to work so they don’t have enough time together with their family. In order to meet children’s and parent’s mental demands making them feel not lonely people always choose feed pets such as dog, bird ,cat and fish for their family. For the starter, Puppy is a loyal friend and audience to it host. You can playing with them to spend lonely and leisure time, and when you feel lonely or have bad mood you can tell the puppy to share with them. Sometimes pet even can help to cure some mental disease. In addition, people regard pet as a family number. We living with the them so we should have a some time to take care of them to prepare food and feed them when it hunger. Giving the pet shower when it dirty. Taking it to hospital when it sick. That will cultivate strong sense of responsibility. So pets are vital part of in some people life.