Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Never too old to learn. My former headmaster will be retiring next week, at that moment, lots of students will attend the ceremony. At the day the party holds, my headmaster is just forties year's work since he put himself into this career. At the party, he told us he want to do some gardening's during the retired day. This is a good idea, isn't it? When a man or woman retired, he or she need to find something to make his or her life substantial. With the thing them do, they should be feel much more happier.