高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

In the past,my hometown is all around the trees ,the fishes were played in the river,the houses were simple ,the road are limited . the people lead a poor live. but at the moment,a lot of buliding were set up ,the cas were all over ,the Industrial Development environment,the trees and the fishes disappear.