托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

I think it is benefits for students to have computer. With the development of the technology and information, computer had gained ground quite, especially for students computer play a vital role to their study For the starter, more and more university use distance education to teach the student. For students it is convenient that they can choose the course in every time and place and meet the excellent teacher they want. For teacher distance learning can save their lot of time they don’t need go to school repeat teach students everyday. In addition, teach can assign homework through the internet and student can handle in home use the computer. Through the distance education teacher can get some feedback. That is an advanced teaching methods nowadays