托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇；作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

I think it is benefits for students to have computer. With the development of the technology and information, computer had gained ground quite, especially for students computer play a vital role to their study For the starter, more and more university use distance education to teach the student. For students it is convenient that they can choose the course in every time and place and meet the excellent teacher they want. For teacher distance learning can save their lot of time they don’t need go to school repeat teach students every day. In addition, teach can assign homework through the internet and student can handle in home use the computer. Through the distance education teacher can get some feedback. That is an advanced forms of education.