托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Nowaday, people have to take most of time to work so they don’t have enough time together with their family. In order to meet children’s and parent’s mental demands making them feel not lonely people always choose feed pets such as dog, bird ,cat and fish for their family. For the starter, Puppy is a loyal friend and audience to it host. We can play with it to spend lonely and leisure time, and when we feel lonely or have bad mood we can tell the puppy. Sometimes pet even can help to cure some mental disease. In addition, people regard pet as a family number. We living with the pet so we should have some time to take care of it. Feeding it when it hunger. Giving the pet shower when it dirty. Taking it to hospital when it sick. That will cultivate strong sense of responsibility. So pets are vital part for some people life.