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作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；能够使用一些简单的从句；可以适当增加副词的使用。
GuiZhou is my hometown,nowadays,along with the development of economy,more and more city was beautiful.In recent years,my hometown has experienced an alarming increase in tourist information. If a foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,I will give he visit to beautiful park.My hometown has many displays the brilliant culture and long history. If you visit my hometown,you wil see many other countries and cities history culture. my hometown not only have a long history,but also have delicious snack,if you eat them,you will full of praise. welcome you visit my hometown,because traveling widens one's vision,enriches one's konwledge and cultivates independence.
