3、参考词汇:缺失父母absentee parents
拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章层次较为清晰。
Don’t leave kids behind According to incomplete statistics,there are more than 22 million of rural children throughout the country, who was left at home with relatives while their parents work in urban areas. Parental care is vital to ensure a child’s healthy development.Children who do not stay with their parents tend to develop unhealthy tendencies both in their behavior and personality. A recent survey of these children made in Hunan Province has found that students with absentee parents usually perform badly in their studies.Most of them have psychological problems. The survey also found that these children are also badly hurt by a feeling that they are different from children whose parents remain at home.It is quite easy for them to feel lonely and unhappy.They have difficulty communicating with others and cannot acquire the abilities they should have obtained at their age.When a serious flood hit a village in Hunan last year,11 of the l2 children killed were from such families. Something must be done to help the children left behind in rural areas.