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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
GuiZhou is my hometown,nowadays,along with the development of economy,more and more city more and more beautiful.In recent years,my hometown has experienced an alarming increase in tourist information. If a foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,I am going to take him to visit beautiful park.My hometown displays the brilliant culture and long history of an city. If you come to visit my hometown,you will see other countries and cities have no history and scenery. My hometown is not only has a long history,but also have delicious snack,if you eat them,you will be full of praise. Welcome you visit my hometown,because traveling widens one's vision,enriches one's knowledge and cultivates independence.
