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Dear friend, I heard that youwill come to China with your parents a few days and you will spend the Mid-Autumn Day in China.I was very happpy that you asked me something about this festival.The Mid-Autumn Day is a Chinese traditional festival.It has a long history and it's a special festival that only China have.On that day,the family will have dinner together.The will also eat the mooncake and enjoy the moon together.I am looking forward youwill come to China soon and I am sure you will a meaningful holiday!