广东汕头市2013届高三上学期期末试卷英语作文

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Last weekend i dialog with mr Kelly Lam whom is a fames psychology.we find over 30% students will not to share in their feeling, even happiness or unhappiness. The education is not teach us that the importance of the shareing. Mr Kelly Lam said: It is nessesarry to learn share in our age. It is very advantage for us to learn shareing the feel.