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To begin with, I am so honored to be invited to contribute my suggestions and ideas. As a traditional ceremony which has been long existing, arts festival should keep some original programs. Besides the original ones, we should also keep in mind that fashionable things are also magnificent. If we mix the original ones with the fashionable ones, our arts festival will surely be a big success. What’s more, programs which have national feature are also important. Besides, we can also arrange some programs which have global characteristics. I suggest entitling our arts festival as “enjoy a multicultural China, learn from the globe.”
