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Good ways to keep healthy is really important.I have many ways to keep healthy.For example,you should drink a glass of water every morning,eat less meat and eat more vegetable and fruit.And you should do more exercise,take a walk and play ball games.On the one inportant hand.You should happiness keep,make more friend and smile every day.Those are very inportant. If you can do those.You will be keep healthy
